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Spectator Sport: Huahin Beach
I walk along the beach. I look as far as my sight could reach. I see the sun slowly rises with a bright light that I could just glimpse for its beauty. Pacific tides in the morning are really low that there are spaces to walk. I enjoy walking along the beach with mirth because I can just free myself from everything. There is no need for me to put any thought or burden when I am out there. This place lacked strident noises. I love the docile wind that blows around me. I love my hair that flows by the wind. I stretch out my hands and feel how the wind gently embraces around me. What a wonderful morning!
Sunny afternoon on the beach is what never pleasant me. I do not like to be under the sun that feels like burning me. Sometimes it is so hot that I seem like being roasted on a stove.
When sunset came, the sky turns to orange red saying good bye to the sun. It is slowly went down like when it rises. The sun moves in circle like a merry-go-round. The sky turns to purple and darker as it gets into night. The wind becomes stronger and colder like pressing an air conditioner to a lower temperature. I love the wind like I have said. At least it is with me when I am alone. It surrounds me like there is another person beside me. I look up to the sky and see the moon that gives off light instead of the sun. It shines in the dark like saying even though you are in the dark and could hardly find the path to continue, there will be a light that will always guide you. Tides during night time come up so much that a little area is left to occupy. The sand I step on is very smooth and I can just take off my slipper and walk with bear feet. The sand which is near to the edge of the water is softer than where I stand before. When I step on the sand, it just sinks and creates a hole. I see how the water and sand react to that hole. I swing my foot in the water feeling satiated and how comfortable it makes. I walk back following the moonlight, saying good night to all.
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ReplyDeleteI like your style of writing... I can feel the wind blow from that descriptive sentence! I don't think you have to fix anything because I think this is an amazing writing! And I'm bad at grammar and everything so... this is awesome. I love how you describe the sun with the merry-go-round xD and even though I don't really like beach but I want to lay down there and watch the color changing of the sky right now. I just want to play at the beach, touch the sand, and feel the wind blow through my (short-)hair. :3
ReplyDelete- Nattanun Sumpunkulpak P8
ps. the first comment I forgot to write my name and period
Thank you Nattanun. I will improve my writing more. I am happy that you enjoy my writing!
DeleteNice essay! :) I really liked and enjoyed reading it. It was quite descriptive and I could really imagine what you were trying to portray. There are a few mistakes in grammar though. Your description of the sun was really nice. Loved reading it! :) -Saranya
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Saranya, for helping me today too!!!
DeleteI will improve that. Thanks again:D!!